Stargirl again.

Khari Johnson

What is intriguing you about the characters?
Their grasp on reality is intriguing.

What is intriguing you about the plot or setting?
How beautiful it is, it's realitive newness, the desert setting and the sun.

What is stopping you from reading?
Not enough time to read.

What is going on in the narration/POV/voice that either grabs your attention or has NOT grabbed your attention?
I like how it's narrated from an outsiders point of view, which is a point of view that is very relevant.

Pg. 17, the second to last paragraph.
This was well written because of the isolation and strangeness it affects on the reader with the lines, "She walked directly into the sun," and "With every step the silence grew, as did my sense that she knew-- had all along-- that she was being followed.